Perfection...Your words are so full of imagery that they put the reader there in the midst of the storm. I could actually feel the energy pulsing through out and a sigh as 'tranquillity perfumes the midnight air'
What matters is the rainbow after a storm. Gwen, this is so well-written. You have so creatively described the storm. This poem can be read in more than one way. Wonderful metaphors!
The gathering storm musters all its latent energies and powers
in spectacular and spontaneous fashion.
This is a Tour De Force of epic passioante proportions Gwen !
Love
Peter
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 8, 2005
A first-rate fireworks display! Clash of the Titans ... yeah, sometimes it's just like that.
Until next time..Blimey go you lady.. A powerful kinda storm is this!!
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2005
Gwen, this is a masterpiece,....it's rapid depth and fast pace in combined in your style and talent ; sends the massage to clear and
powerful without hesitation! the vision is so real and so concise!
Excellence and I would love to read more from you in this style!
can't say enough!!!!
outstanding!
peace and joyfilled healthy life to you',
Rich Criso
A holistic view of nature's passionate embrace. Thunder and "sheet" lightning are bedding celestial lovers, the hail sizzling and melting upon the cloud's mattress of heat! EXcellent, passionate metaphor, Gwen. Until next time ... Stormy and Wet!
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
in spectacular and spontaneous fashion.
This is a Tour De Force of epic passioante proportions Gwen !
Love
Peter
Love & Light,
Joseph
Paul;-)
Dan
TRASK
powerful without hesitation! the vision is so real and so concise!
Excellence and I would love to read more from you in this style!
can't say enough!!!!
outstanding!
peace and joyfilled healthy life to you',
Rich Criso
Regis
Sage
Just love this line!!
Outstanding work!!
Love Tinka
TX
A passionate storm to remember!
Love,
Eileen
That was some kind of wild night! Glorious penning, Gwen. ~~Nordette