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Say It In a Poem
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You hurt me Deep within my soul Lies, pain, fear and joy Things I don't even know What you see is normal What I feel is hidden But when you force my hand It is then I know I can Reach deep down and grab That which makes it clear The pain you elicit is numb A way for you to see me tears, my fears The many times your touch reached my heart like a gun

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Reviews of "Say It In a Poem"

Reviewed by Gisele Vincent-Page

Reviewed on November 4, 2011

Patricia, what a powerful line: The many times your touch reached my heart like a gun. You create a wonderful contrast by using gentle words to describe your pain created by an abuser. Good writing. peace Gisele

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on May 7, 2009

I love reading your poetry.You don't hold anything back and you let your feelings come out in your poems.Take care,keep up the great work

Edwin

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on April 27, 2009

Tragic lines of pain and torment. Very moving poem.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 27, 2009

So full of pain...effectively written.

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