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The Loon
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I wrote this directly after a flash flood destroyed my Alstead, NH neighberhood. As I sat in a strangers unfriendly cottage, numbly staring at a lake, a loon called to my aching heart. . .

The Loon

by The Poetess (SRP)

 

As winter teases this cottage on shore,

It’s freezing surface challenges

The warmth in my core.

But I can still hear it,

Through the frosty mist,

Calling for me to release my pain.

So subtle, so soft, yet clear. . .

The loon crying in the rain.


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Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on January 19, 2011
I was blessed to spend quite a few summer nights in a cabin on a lake in Maine. Waking up in the middle of the night to their magical sound is something I will never forget.
The place in Maine where I go now is back in the forest- but coyotes are just as amazing to me with their howls. Nature heals like nothing else.

John

Reviewed by Judith Ann (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2010
You are so right that releasing our pain is key to embracing our future with hope and light.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Soul-stirring and compelling are your verses, Poetess. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 28, 2010
Listen to the loon for it knows you. Patrick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 26, 2010
Beautiful poety....you have a new follower....love your writing!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 26, 2010
I've always been captivated by loon calls in the mist. One of earth's oldest and wisest birds.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 26, 2010
Living here in NH myself, I can appreciate the meaning in this.
Well done.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
Parts of New Hampshire was hit hard, according to the news. I pray you are doing better...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
Highly atmospheric, charged with meaning.

John

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
Crazy as the loon, huh Poetess...how nature can take it away all so fast. The loon is a haunting creature with an eerie call, one that sounds like a wolf at times and then a tremolo pitch...could have been an omen. The loons are the main characters in my novel The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler. They are beautiful with red eyes naturally. It's a healing poem, and I hope you are healing...Blessed Be.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
Sometimes in the midst of pain, we find a glimmer of hope that turns us into a beacon of light. Wonderful words in this piece!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
Great imagery amidst devastation and always looking for a better tomorrow.


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