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A Treasure (Part 2)
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Do I still hold "A treasure?"

Remnants of Bliss
by The Poetess (SRP)

 

I found a treasure long ago

To me the Light it dared to show
But as I stumbled muddy land
It was taken from my hand.

I grope to find the little trace
It left in eyes upon my face.
It is here. I’m sure it is -
Remnants of bliss.

 


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 Reviews of "A Treasure (Part 2)"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Very well done indeed enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 31, 2010
Remnants of bliss sometimes give us something to hold on to. This is a moving piece.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed on August 30, 2010
I like this in two parts. Jump in again. - Morgan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 30, 2010
There are times when darkness falls and we stumble, dropping that light....the trick is to get right back up and find it again....thought provoking words in your poem....

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
The pursuit of happiness finely delivered.

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
THERE IS NO GREATER SATISFACTION THAN AT LAST COMING FACE TO FACE WITH THE 'LIGHT', THAT IS SOMETIMES OBSCURED, BUT SHOWS US OURSELVES SO CANDIDLY. A 'WELL DONE' PART TWO. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
No time for skepticism now. Press on. Patrick

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
We must never lose sight of Bliss for she is a wonderful one and a beacon in the midst of darkness. I find your verse inspiring, Poetess. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Wonderful and inspiring as we all seek to find and hold onto that bliss.

George

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Lovely second installment.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
Beautiful continuation. God bless.


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