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Circles
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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OK they're not perfect circles. Looks good in microsoft word but the AD text editor hates me.

                                                                            F     L

                                                                       L               O

                                                                    E                      V

                                                                  S        O   U           E

                                                                 Y    Y              D       T

                                                                 H O                    O   H

                                                                 T                          U  Y

                                                             N  S                            N

                                                           U    A                          E   T

                                                         O        R                       I      O

                                                        D            O                G           O

                                                       S                     B     H                T

                                                      R                                                H

                                                      E                                                  E                

                                                      H                                                 R

                                                      T                                                  S

                                                       O                                                A

                                                         E                                              S

                                                          V                                           Y

                                                            A                                      O

                                                               H                               U

                                                                   D                        W 

                                                                         L              O

                                                                                 U              

 

 

 Copyright Patrick Granfors  2010

 


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 Reviews of "Circles"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
... Funny how the "do unto others" is a bigger slice of the pie and equation than the "neighbour as thyself"-bit; I think that's a picture of reality in some ways... Our lack of self-esteem often causes us to treat others with the same dismal lack of respect we regard ourselves with. Perhaps we need to read like a healthy, standing-up-straight 8 and not a collapsed-state 8!!!! :)) xx Impressive in its achievement here, Patrick!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 16, 2010
Neat! A golden rule chain. I like it.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 16, 2010
Aren't you a clever one;-) it must have taken patience,so i give you an A+ neighbor! heehee...ET

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 16, 2010
Plenty of time to doodle with the AD editor.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
WOW! You deserve an AWARD for this poem.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
Very kool presentation for profound words, Patrick....love it!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
If you had named this 'Eggs' they'd look pretty good!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
AD management also should do something about that question marks that are ruining short stories and poetry text, and fix the Editor too!

Georg




Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
It took me a couple of minutes to figure out, but I like the idea and I think that a lot can be done using this concept. As Peter Schlosser said, the editor is pretty hard to use, so well done.

Axilea

Reviewed on May 14, 2010
You're saying something in a round about way, that's not like you Patrick........

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
That's very cool!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
Reminds me of the circles I travel in.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
True, the AD text editor was a great deal better when they didn't have it...e

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
Love it.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
The only failure is never having tried at all, my friend. Well done.

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
bored today Patrick?....that must've consumed some hours....neat tho!

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2010
That text editor is a freakin' nightmare!! I can't even get my poems to come out right!!


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