An interesting personal trip. Often, in 1958, my Dad gave me the keys to our rad black '57 Ford to go cruising and drag racing. Even asked me 'how fast?' it would go.
I had pimples and boyish look, but no sweat problem in track or wrestling.
Ron
Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on August 9, 2010
A great story done with such humour! Sometimes you come across a poem that makes you giggle all the way through, this is one of them Patrick! Guess it is just that we can all relate, but who among us would be brave enough to write about smelly feet? Loved it!
patrick you've given us all a wonderful sneaker flashback... i still havemy favorite pair of paint spatterd, laceless. dirty dirty...lima bean-shaped 'tennises'that have been rescued from the trash...burn pile...hidden in the workshop....wouldn't dare wear them w/out sox tho
LOL, I had a pair of sneaks that I adored. Comfortable? OH yeah. But stink?!?? Oh, my word. Twin sis threw them in the incinerator as a favor to the rest of the household. I wasn't too amused ... and have never found another pair as comfortable as those sneaks were! Well done.
That certainly is telling it like it was, Patrick. I have a sibling whose feet were not kind when he was younger... ...and I had to sleep in the same room!!! Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
Fabulous!
I knew you'd poetically put out Patrick, a bardic talent like you ~ Yes! This is terrific, full of icky images and scents!
Besides, 1968 was a great year...the year I was born.
Awesome poem, awesome year!
Christine
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
I had pimples and boyish look, but no sweat problem in track or wrestling.
Ron
Best wishes
david
But not for lack of trying
Luck is huge in life
I wish I could say I was as lucky; my poor old Dad's car!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regis
I knew you'd poetically put out Patrick, a bardic talent like you ~ Yes! This is terrific, full of icky images and scents!
Besides, 1968 was a great year...the year I was born.
Awesome poem, awesome year!
Christine
Your friend, Mark
Cheers,
Dan