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Sneakers
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Just Do It!

                    1968

Drivers License!

You could get a limited one at 15-1/2, or wait till 16

You had to go through driver’s education, then a learner’s permit process

With Mom or Dad agonizing in the passenger seat

Dad couldn’t handle it so Mom did the deed most of the time

 

Finally after passing (barely) a DMV driving test

Freedom!!

Well sort of

Permission is a four letter word

Ultimately the folks got more comfortable

The keys came a little easier

I never once crashed their vehicle

But not for lack of trying

Luck is huge in life

 

I attended a local Lutheran church then

Had a little crush on a couple of girls my age

In the summer the church sponsored Bible studies for the youngsters

They needed older teenage volunteers to help

Since the objects of my interest participated

I was there with enthusiasm

 

Back then it was cool to wear shoes without socks

Penny loafers or sneakers, it didn’t matter

I’ve always had sweaty feet

Sweaty, sweaty feet

High end leather top sneakers were really uncommon

Adidas made them but primarily for track

I ran the 100 yard high hurdles, and cross country

Always with socks

 

But my runabout canvas top sneakers were not so fortunate

No Socks

It is really quite amazing how soon Mother Nature can unleash critters

Inside a shoe, not the furry kind, well maybe

 

Weeks of sockless wear took a terrible toll on my shoes and toes

The washing machine was of no use.

Bleach was useless

Canvas sneakers breathe alright

Eye watering foot halitosis

Might as well have been barefoot in a cowpie

 

My enthusiasm waned rather quickly for Bible Study supervision

Baby sitting little ones making Jesus bracelets was less fun

Without peer involvement

 

I decided that socks were cool

And my sneakers thanked me

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 


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 Reviews of "Sneakers"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
An interesting personal trip. Often, in 1958, my Dad gave me the keys to our rad black '57 Ford to go cruising and drag racing. Even asked me 'how fast?' it would go.

I had pimples and boyish look, but no sweat problem in track or wrestling.

Ron

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on August 9, 2010
A great story done with such humour! Sometimes you come across a poem that makes you giggle all the way through, this is one of them Patrick! Guess it is just that we can all relate, but who among us would be brave enough to write about smelly feet? Loved it!

Best wishes
david

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 9, 2010
I never once crashed their vehicle
But not for lack of trying
Luck is huge in life

I wish I could say I was as lucky; my poor old Dad's car!




Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on August 8, 2010
patrick you've given us all a wonderful sneaker flashback... i still havemy favorite pair of paint spatterd, laceless. dirty dirty...lima bean-shaped 'tennises'that have been rescued from the trash...burn pile...hidden in the workshop....wouldn't dare wear them w/out sox tho

Reviewed on August 8, 2010
LOL, I had a pair of sneaks that I adored. Comfortable? OH yeah. But stink?!?? Oh, my word. Twin sis threw them in the incinerator as a favor to the rest of the household. I wasn't too amused ... and have never found another pair as comfortable as those sneaks were! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
That certainly is telling it like it was, Patrick. I have a sibling whose feet were not kind when he was younger... ...and I had to sleep in the same room!!! Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
Fabulous!
I knew you'd poetically put out Patrick, a bardic talent like you ~ Yes! This is terrific, full of icky images and scents!
Besides, 1968 was a great year...the year I was born.
Awesome poem, awesome year!
Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
thanks for sharing a look back,feel like i know you a bit better now;-)Well done!etw

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
OMG, Patrick, a poem/story about "sweaty, sweaty" stinky feet. Oh, well, I've seen weirder from you
Your friend, Mark

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
I hope you still wear socks cause if you don't, please stay away from NJ...we have enough odd odors out here...e

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
and the rest of the world thanks you to...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
Interesting write, Patrick. Well done.


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