Too many things we hear see and read do affect our thoughts in turn our well being.
They keep on
passing by
the the days when reason
seems to hide,
when all you read
is negative words
no ones thinking
with a positive verb,
just with sadness
many things unheard.
Like the human race
is in depression
has no way out
just negative obsession,
with wars that are counted
with the dead
children badly underfed
bank accounts all gone negative
unemployed looking
so tired and desperate.
Turn aside
from such measured words
that bind you were
deserted
left as unloved
even by God
because you read
so much negative stuff.
Look beyond the closed eye
see what could be
if things were right,
believe they can
believe they will
then rise above
this negative world.
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Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2009
awwww...thatz bad,dont keep negative thoughts...become imaginative...it helps....create your own world,live in, invite your true buddies...you'll see a wonderful world... good wishes John...beautifully written but. neerja