A midnight mist lies deep across the placid streets—
A quiet lie—a perishing promise of what the hidden dawn secretes.
I know. I am that city’s embryo. Yet an exile,
And thrust by birth and perverse error of the erstwhile.
The centuries fell—two, then three—while the void forgot,
Until it dropped me here—another sidewalk stain, another city blot.
And thus, by treachery, an exile from a time I never knew,
When cities and lies and men, and even promises were few.
A better season, that. Free of strict assurance and custody—
And free of shackled safety, shield and shelter, asylum and security.
Oh, to be where untainted winds still bent the mighty fir
That fell before my time, but did my soul inter.
Creator of the ages did err to place me so—
Or punishes me from righteousness for sins I’ve yet to know.
“Time will tell,” in ignorance, my sympathizers say,
But time for me has come and gone within that other day.
Wishing you the best of all things, sir,
Jim
I think the poem is adequately delivering the message that was intended, and is well written. I like it!!
Sandie Angel :o)
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~Nikki~
..."I am that city's embryo..."
..."The centuries fell—two, then three—while the void forgot,
Until it dropped me here—another sidewalk stain, another city blot."...
Absolutely magnificent. So true and such a unique and wise way of saying exactly what we truly are. This whole poem is Superb Mike! Su perb!!!
I just love your mind. You really speak volumes and so powerfully and your writings, all of them, really imbed on my mind.
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I read your poems and stories and the message and story really smaks me even harder when I'm writing to you. They really leave such a powerful impact. Wonderful! Thanks Mike! xoox
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