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Me
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Me

 

Where did I go?

Was there ever a me

A soul to believe?

 

Turning inside out

I turned outside in.

Suffocating within.

 

When did it stop?

My heart

Can’t hear it, do you?

 

I’m a lost soul

Wandering between

A nightmarish dream.

 

Deborah Ann Tornillo

Copyright© 2010

 


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 Reviews of "Me"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
Time to wake up and see the world with new eyes, then you will hear your heart, as all comes alive around you....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
A poem of truth, and beautifully written.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Paul Drouillard
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
This is what poetry is capable of; baring the soul.

Well done Deborah

-Paul

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
Life often deals us hands that we accept and have to play out even though we know it is a no win situation but it means we are still in the game and that is what matters. You captured well the feelings of one who is weary of life and yet still not ready to give up, only looking for time to regroup and move forward. Great write...
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Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
Perhaps hibernation is not a decision.
Perhaps- like a computer- there is sometimes a need to shut down.
This reminds me well of more difficult times in my life, and I can only marvel that they ever passed- and at the cost.

There was a you. In the winter you might not believe it can ever come back- but life does return.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
I feel that way quite often, Deborah. A compelling write; thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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