Sign In Please (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Goff

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Very vampiric, yet human. I liked your pacing.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on September 24, 2006

A very deep compelling piece. Well done ......M

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 14, 2005

very good!!!

loved how it flowed and kept the reader intrigued, wanting more

is there more?/

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2004

I had no idea he could be so romantic and poetic. This truly tells how she falls into his spell.
This is Great.
Have a Terrific day everyday.
Tracey

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

Carpe Diem!! Great and chilling write here. I am sorry I didn't read this closer to Halloween! Wonderfully spine tingling! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 31, 2004

Creepiest of creepies! Let me get my fangs on first. LOL.
Fantabulous, darling!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Brrrrrrrrrr! Effective expression as you intended, Paul. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

OOOOHHHH I'm scared!!! This is a taunting poem that echoes the cemetary warning "Watch where ye tread!".
Susan

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Excellent rhyme and meter, Paul.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Errie and extremely well written!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Woo Paul, this is really creepy and masterfully penned. I loved this poem, deliciously dark!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Okay!!

What could be worse...now or later..lol!!

We all need to go down Under!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Hehehehehe - I must be warped I found this delightful. The last two lines really set me off:

"Squander not, make bold your script,
join me now within my crypt"

Those words are in fact, quite wise. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

This is scary Paul I loved it....
Was passing by seen a post and stopped well done.
LP

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

excellently chilling, This one cuts like a knife into the heart,

Reindeer

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is awsome!!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

(((paul)))

not a story to read on a night when you're alone--GEEZ! excellent, creepy, chill inducing write *cringe*

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :0

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Paul, dripping with fear juice, excellent motif...Happy halloween to you too! I just posted too;-)

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Spooky good...Love the second stanza...