It's the greatest of joy all life can bring An inner feeling, that golden ring This eternal flame which can't be extinguished Windblown, flawless and easily distinguished
It's anticipation of being close by A feeling one gets, a magical high More than an arrow which pierces the heart It inspires and teaches an integral part
It's growth meant to nurture each passing day Safeguarded moments when we're away Blessed and Holy sent from above No one can measure His Power Of Love
A wonderful display of your faith, Paul! What I like about this poem is that it's not preachy like many 'religious poems' tend to be. It clearly captures the feeling one gets when they believe, and it's a creative way to show your love for Him and His love for you. Love the rhyme scheme, too. Great work here:)
We all so much take for granted "the greatest of joy all life can bring," never pausing to realize that love, itself, is "Blessed and Holy" and "sent from above."
Your words offer more insight than I've read in quite some time, Paul. And since I recently quoted words that you used in reviewing Jeanette Cooper's "My Heart is Aching," I invite you to post your poem above in my den site as a review commentary for my latest posting, an article titled, "Love."
Your den site is fabulous. I'll be back soon and spent considerable time here and be richer by far.
L * O * V * E
It's GOLDEN just like this POem!
Truly said in your graceful way Paul!
A gem of a Treasure to keep forever!!!
Thank YOu for sharing your heart and Soul!
PEACE and WArmest Blessings! WArmly, Lady Sheeeoox
If it wasn't for the love of God, I don't know how I could have survived my stay in the hospital this past month.
Thanks for the encouraging write. Well done. :o)
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
This is so beautiful and a powerful message Paul touches the reader deeply to the truths of this work.
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We all so much take for granted "the greatest of joy all life can bring," never pausing to realize that love, itself, is "Blessed and Holy" and "sent from above."
Your words offer more insight than I've read in quite some time, Paul. And since I recently quoted words that you used in reviewing Jeanette Cooper's "My Heart is Aching," I invite you to post your poem above in my den site as a review commentary for my latest posting, an article titled, "Love."
Your den site is fabulous. I'll be back soon and spent considerable time here and be richer by far.
With sincere respect,
Richard
It's GOLDEN just like this POem!
Truly said in your graceful way Paul!
A gem of a Treasure to keep forever!!!
Thank YOu for sharing your heart and Soul!
PEACE and WArmest Blessings! WArmly, Lady Sheeeoox
I simply enjoy the uplifting and joyous voice expressed!
...great work with the rhyme and meter as well...
..jeanne..
it is just a shame so many throw it away to live in todays world
Beautiful write
TY Ch'erie
God Bless
Lena
inspired and well written ...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Thanks for the encouraging write. Well done. :o)
Blessings,
Joselyn
Love Tinka
Blessings,
Sharon
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Sandie May Angel :o)
Love,
CJ