I had the words and the music ringing in my ears all Friday night. I couln't get to sleep so I got up and wrote the lyrics down. Unfortunately my musical abilities are very limited but if your interested I'll hum a few bars. (lol)
Verse
If I walk away alone never make it on my own would this world become a three part melody? Please tell me!
Verse
Do you no longer feel what we had was once so real don't just turn around and pretend you never cared. Please tell me!
Chorus
Why do seasons ever end? Can love inside us be so blind? Why must we both pretend, when there's something on our mind? Please tell me!
Verse
We can change the dark to light. If this is wrong it feels so right. I could make it through the night Please tell me!
Verse
You'll always be a part of the summer in my heart. Has the winter of your soul for me grown cold? Please tell me!
Chorus
Why do all seasons end? Can love inside us be so blind? Why must we both pretend when there's something on our mind? Please tell me!
If you are like me Paul, you know that when the words come, if you don;t write them down you never quite find them again...even snipets are of value when we get a chance to return to them. This is such a sad song Paul, the kind the music industry craves because it has such a personal ring, one so many can identify with. I think this could easily be put to music...I hear a melody.
Love,
Taylor
Paul... BEST WORKS seem to always come in the middle of the night... I'm so glad you got up to save these words! It was well worth it... I really love it and would really like to hear the melody. Congrats on a great inspiration. (Good luck sleeping through the night tonight!) Cheers! Amy S
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
(Okay) I'm clapping. Can you see me? I hope so, because I enjoyed this, love holly
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Paul,
Beautiful I could hear bars maybe not the same but it was beautiful your poems are always sterling to me....
I like this very much, Paul, because of the sincerity of the words and intensity of the voice. The rhythm could fit a number of different musical styles, which just goes to show how universal the sentiments are. A slow ballad or an upbeat hip-hop... Take your pick... I am sure there must be someone musical amongst us who could assist in your composition. It certainly makes one great song. TY and good luck with it. Kate xx
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Pretty good. You just need to find a simple key board with on board instruments and you can even start by just using finger cords then you can have your own music for it. Lady J
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This is a sad, tender piece. What I like best is the realistic feel to your words. Well done!
Sheila
Love,
Taylor
Love Tinka
I have enjoyed the reading of a great song... "Please Tell Me" can make the CHARTERS OF THE MUSIC BOARDS.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love,
CJ
Eileen
Beautiful I could hear bars maybe not the same but it was beautiful your poems are always sterling to me....
Peace,
josie
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Beautiful song with thought provoking questions; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hugs, Laura