Sacred Warriors (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

A very powerful write, Paul. Many extremely intriguing lines here. "Eventually even life will strangle itself, and my being shall be long forgotten." - This is unique expression and it evokes sadness because no soldier who gave "mind and body" should be forgotten. Thank you for sharing this piece!
Sheila

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Aching and beautifully penned, Paul. I find this stanza striking in its truth, maybe evem tinged with hope for others futures...

Eventually even life will strangle itself,
and my being shall be long forgotten.
The space once occupied, laid claim
by another and he won't forget.

Well done. :)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

This was so wonderful, and beautiful to read! it was excellent, I think my favorite lines were:

Destiny relinquished her rights. She tore
my heart and left me naked and drained.
The face of death is not a stranger
and He may become my salvation.

But I just loved every word!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sara L. Russell

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

This poem is very powerful, and often so true of veteran soldiers who have fought for their countries, especially here:
"Abruptly people become deaf when
you reach for recognition."
I hope that there is salvation in this life as well as the next. Perhaps poets can make a difference in the world. Great write...
Sara.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Thought provoking write

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Very powerful write! Thought-provoking piece!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Brilliant piece..."Is this hunger and burning within, one of righteousness or emptiness?" This speaks volumes, something for all to ponder;-)

Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

I agree this was outstanding!!!. Thelma

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Paul, Paul, Paul..."Camouflaged but encasing the colors proudly, a constitution of morality plagues my existance". Ooooohhh.....gave me goosebumps! Chilling read! Thank you!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

I agree ....most intense and very well written.....As for your quote on your bio....I'd tend to agree....writing is a salve for almost anything....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Intense play with words.. Had to read it twice.. Great write!

Reviewed by Sara Nichols (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Beautiful write Paul.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Outstanding Paul!
Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

So powerful, Paul. Incredible write.