This poem is a little something I cooked up. Pardon the pun. I believe in capital punishment if the crime is so deserving. If you take a precious life you should be willing to give yours. If you can't pay the price, " be nice."
Currents rage to posess
every occupied nerve cell,
destroying the data
contained within them.
Every limb exposed fights
to remain intact.
They hold, but sense the vulnerability,
to the point of explosion.
The mind beckons insanity
to entertain a moment of relief.
Never have so many hair follicles
marched to the pipers tune.
Odors of burnt flesh and cordite
fill the nasal passages.
Hundreds of tiny pores expand
to expose naked blood vessels.
It is over. The final second is
memory for he who watches.
For the executed, an eternity
has begun.
I must agree with you on this one. Far too many criminals sit in prison, using our resources and earning degrees. Love the line about the hair follicles! -Sheila
A powerful, chilling poem....superbly written
Chrissie
Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
I used to believe very strongly in Capital Punishment untill I moved to Texas. Now I am torn, It seems that too many innocent people are finding their way on death row here. But wonderful poem written.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
whew, Is the chair still in use? Great Write, Paul
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I must agree with you on this one. Far too many criminals sit in prison, using our resources and earning degrees. Love the line about the hair follicles! -Sheila
Strong and engulfing, Paul.
I agree, too.
~E
Reindeer
There is a great spark in the piece .
A real heavy duty one .
Chrissie
tony
every moment in this write..
I am speechless . Reminds me
of my..Fifteen Minutes to
Midnite. Yours is MUCH better.
Your Friend, Linda