When I was a child a rabid raccoon tried to enter our 4th grade classroom through the window. The classroom was three stories up and the raccoon sat on the 1 foot window sill. Never found out how he got there or whatever happened to him. This is my rendition.
Large fangs complimented the bulging eyes.
Saliva trailed in myriad pools.
Still, there was a gentleness within
that diseased body that echoed compassion.
Penetrating the window seemed to be
the scheme, or was the creature merely
trying to survive by attacking his own
grotesque reflection? Either way he had purpose.
The venom trickled down the pane
with every gnashing and clawing from
its hideous form. We knew it was only
a matter of time before the final surge.
He quickly relinquished all rights to
his last stand. A moment of sanity?
Perhaps, but we know there are others
out there just like he, keeping vigilance.
A rabid groundhog got into my mother's house once. She chased it out with a broom but it wouldn't run away. She called animal control and they sent someone. I watched the guy get his shotgun from the trunk of his car, but I couldn't watch the rest. I was behind the house when the blast sounded. Your poem reminds me of that day...the way the animal looked. So sad. Fantastic descriptions in this piece, Paul! Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Paul, you took us there. I've always hated facing these type critters. Around where I live it is best to run into one of them though, rather than the hoodlums.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
We have possums around here...and we have to watch out just in case...
Good write, Paul...
Hi Paul,
My eldest son was such
an animal lover...
I kid you not, he had
a raccoon as a pet...
Bandit was his name..
My son just had a way
with animals...
Like this write..
Trixie :)
Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
When I was stationed at Vandenberg AFB we had a troop that lured one into his gate-shack When the door closed the raccoon became possessed and destroyed the place. Was funny as hell when We arrived to find a young terrified Airman standing on the counter with a broom.
Great poem
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Still laughing at Bill's comment.
Well done, Paul.
~E
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
There are no racoons in Alberta I found out when I moved out there from Ontario and asked if they were having any problems with the coons in the field. The largest I have seen so far live in Ohio.
Thanks for giving us a peek
into your 4th grade classroom...
Excellent write, my friend...
I live in the country and have
seen firsthand how vicious a rabid
animal can be. Poor raccoon. A
terrible way to die.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Paul, I would have been scared to death. I know what damage this animal can do. A great fighter that often pulls hunting dogs into the water and then drowns them. One tough hombre. I would have probably messed my pants. Great write. Bill
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Good Morning, Paul
I like that poem. I love animals, I am always sorry when one has to die.
The fortunate inherit riches, prestige, positive notoriety. Those not so lucky bear legacies filled with poverty, infamy or, worse yet, the unhinged insanity and murderous urges of their ancestors.
Sheila
Scary stuff! Good job!
Good write, Paul...
Reindeer
JC xoxoxo
thank you
namaste
lovely evenin
Chrissie
My eldest son was such
an animal lover...
I kid you not, he had
a raccoon as a pet...
Bandit was his name..
My son just had a way
with animals...
Like this write..
Trixie :)
Great poem
Well done, Paul.
~E
into your 4th grade classroom...
Excellent write, my friend...
I live in the country and have
seen firsthand how vicious a rabid
animal can be. Poor raccoon. A
terrible way to die.
I like that poem. I love animals, I am always sorry when one has to die.
tony