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Rabid
by Paul Berube → (All Poetry by Paul Berube)
  
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When I was a child a rabid raccoon tried to enter our 4th grade classroom through the window. The classroom was three stories up and the raccoon sat on the 1 foot window sill. Never found out how he got there or whatever happened to him. This is my rendition.

Large fangs complimented the bulging eyes.
Saliva trailed in myriad pools.
Still, there was a gentleness within
that diseased body that echoed compassion.

Penetrating the window seemed to be
the scheme, or was the creature merely
trying to survive by attacking his own
grotesque reflection? Either way he had purpose.

The venom trickled down the pane
with every gnashing and clawing from
its hideous form. We knew it was only
a matter of time before the final surge.

He quickly relinquished all rights to
his last stand. A moment of sanity?
Perhaps, but we know there are others
out there just like he, keeping vigilance.

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 Reviews of "Rabid"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 26, 2008
A rabid groundhog got into my mother's house once. She chased it out with a broom but it wouldn't run away. She called animal control and they sent someone. I watched the guy get his shotgun from the trunk of his car, but I couldn't watch the rest. I was behind the house when the blast sounded. Your poem reminds me of that day...the way the animal looked. So sad. Fantastic descriptions in this piece, Paul! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Joyce Scarbrough
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
You should send this poem to Stephen King as a suggestion for his next horror novel. The sequel to "Cujo" perhaps? <G>
Scary stuff! Good job!

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Paul, you took us there. I've always hated facing these type critters. Around where I live it is best to run into one of them though, rather than the hoodlums.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
We have possums around here...and we have to watch out just in case...
Good write, Paul...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
oooh scary...reminds me of the "Birds" with those crows waiting outside of the schoolhouse

Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Boy..This has brought back a few scary memories..I have seen rabid animals, and it is very frightening! This poem was just excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Wow, I would have been scared to pieces! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
OMGosh, this is scary, compassionate and interesting. Good read Paul.

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Wow, Paul, what a wonderful write!! There are several lessons expressed with gentle thoughtfulness, tempered with time's wisdom. :)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
They can be scary cant they Paul...we had an incident with one once also and I will have to write about that...good write...floria

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
ah good good yes
thank you
namaste
lovely evenin

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Paul this is excellent Peggy

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
I agree with Jim, Paul. I enjoyed this excellent piece.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Hi Paul,
My eldest son was such
an animal lover...
I kid you not, he had
a raccoon as a pet...
Bandit was his name..
My son just had a way
with animals...

Like this write..

Trixie :)

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
When I was stationed at Vandenberg AFB we had a troop that lured one into his gate-shack When the door closed the raccoon became possessed and destroyed the place. Was funny as hell when We arrived to find a young terrified Airman standing on the counter with a broom.

Great poem

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Still laughing at Bill's comment.
Well done, Paul.
~E

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
There are no racoons in Alberta I found out when I moved out there from Ontario and asked if they were having any problems with the coons in the field. The largest I have seen so far live in Ohio.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Thanks for giving us a peek
into your 4th grade classroom...
Excellent write, my friend...
I live in the country and have
seen firsthand how vicious a rabid
animal can be. Poor raccoon. A
terrible way to die.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Paul, I would have been scared to death. I know what damage this animal can do. A great fighter that often pulls hunting dogs into the water and then drowns them. One tough hombre. I would have probably messed my pants. Great write. Bill

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Good Morning, Paul
I like that poem. I love animals, I am always sorry when one has to die.


tony

Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Rabid animals are dangerous - especially to pets that live in the country. Excellent write. ~Trish~


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