Paul,
I've got the heebie-jeebies now. I pictured a King Cobra making the kill! I detest and fear snakes. lol. Your comment beforehand rings true to life. That's why it's so important to enjoy the smallest amount of good before it's gone. Great poem! Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Evil sucks!!!
Not your poem!!! its good!!!
but evil!
ya dig?
pax
Anita
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
having eyes in the back of your head might help......I try to look on the positive side, though you wont find me going out alone after dark. I hope this snake doesnt poison you into forgetting the good things in life too.
I loved the way you gripped us with your words.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Well, Paul. I live in the desert. After reading all the comments, all I could think of was rattlesnakes. I tend to be practical in my living experience. Too much to enjoy in life, than look for the darkside all the time. A snake in the desert is enough negativity for me. [smiles]
I liked this, felt the bite a few times, thing is, I am growing immune now, wonder if that is good or not, anyhow, loved this, excellent and truly inspiring poem,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Wow this was great,Paul.
tony
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Paul I too feel its presence. Sometimes I don't know where it resides. (Inside or outside of me.) Maybe it is everywhere. For it comes to attack me even at this lowly poetry site. It takes various disguises: religious, benevolent, loving; but it always has the same purpose to destroy and hurt. You feel it, but you know that God has given you the strength to overcome. Beautiful deep poem Paul.
P.S. I saw your biograpy statement. No Paul you are not "nobody." You are like all of us A CHILD OF GOD. VERY MUCH SOMEBODY AND EQUAL TO ALL IN HIS EYES. You need to take out the "I am nobody," and put in its place in capital letters. "I AM SOMEBODY." ... I am Paul Berebe, and I am somebody! For if I pass this by and let the
statement stand, I would feel like nobody too.
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I've got the heebie-jeebies now. I pictured a King Cobra making the kill! I detest and fear snakes. lol. Your comment beforehand rings true to life. That's why it's so important to enjoy the smallest amount of good before it's gone. Great poem! Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Seriuosly great metaphor in here
there are sepents all around us
Wow...Outstanding..
Trixie :)
Not your poem!!! its good!!!
but evil!
ya dig?
pax
Anita
I loved the way you gripped us with your words.
Chrissie
liked the way you spit that
Evil has done it's job
scoring another conquest
So true Paul...so true!!
Love
Tinka
Reindeer
tony
P.S. I saw your biograpy statement. No Paul you are not "nobody." You are like all of us A CHILD OF GOD. VERY MUCH SOMEBODY AND EQUAL TO ALL IN HIS EYES. You need to take out the "I am nobody," and put in its place in capital letters. "I AM SOMEBODY." ... I am Paul Berebe, and I am somebody! For if I pass this by and let the
statement stand, I would feel like nobody too.
--Karissa
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