No time to stop and savor life.
If I could vow to fulfill everything
that was predestined for me,
the broken promises would never occupy
a place in my soul.
If tomorrow never came I could, at least,
be at peace with myself. The time for strife
to end is beyond life. The desire and love I
find will never interfere with my final chapter.
Yes, my fear is real... and I know that one day
I will stand before my Maker to justify
the wasted time. Only then will I know
my true worth. Then and only then can I say,
I did my best.
Paul,
I like how you have the ability to take on any style and pour your heart and soul into it. We all think along these lines. The way you've put your thoughts into words has a powerful effect. Thank you for sharing this poem. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Great thought provoking write, Paul. This is something that I find constantly tripping through the back of my mind and I find that with regards to this, each day is filled with its own failures AND triumphs... I 'get a handle on this' and then 'lose the plot on that'... I often hear myself saying "slow down world, I wanna get off", but it never complies! So don't we just hang on tight and try to enjoy the view while we are absorbing and learning as much as we can without becoming insular so that we can, if we are very blessed, learn contentment with our world, ourselves and know that we are leaving something of value with the ones whose lives we share.
Well executed sentiments and self-analysis on the time that we accumulate in our lifetime...it is part of life to occupy it with the normal course of living and learning. We always reflect later, on our accomplishments and unkept promises and goals. It is a natural part of our existence. We can only hope that each day we do our best and that is all we can expect of ourselves. Well written expression.
Amor
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Maybe even what you consider wasted time is not really wasted? Precious moments to others? And don't worry, HE will know that you did your best. Great write. Love. S.
Hi Paul,
What an outstanding
write...
One of my favorites
by you...
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
I guess we are both in a chapter frame of mind. Now what is that word??? Oh yeah regret
I just hate it. oops now I am going to regret saying that.
Ok I am rambling but your write lit my brain on fire so its your fault
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
It's all we can do Paul....I love your words....thanks...and good to see you....Dani ;)
This is a wonderful, deeply thoughtful poem, Paul.I always miss your poetry over the weekend, though that's time to spend with your family :)
Chrissie
Chrissie
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2003
Live each day as if it is your best and your last. Love the poem, Paul. Bravo.
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I like how you have the ability to take on any style and pour your heart and soul into it. We all think along these lines. The way you've put your thoughts into words has a powerful effect. Thank you for sharing this poem. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
I worry too, wouldnt be human if we all didnt hey. Fantastic poem, love your way of expression.
Ch'erie
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Amor
What an outstanding
write...
One of my favorites
by you...
Trixie :)
I just hate it. oops now I am going to regret saying that.
Ok I am rambling but your write lit my brain on fire so its your fault
"The Final Chapter" is saying it in full. Great thoughts.
I Salute the Author of "The Final Chapter".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Tinka
Interesting final chaper! I loved this. Excellent imagination.
Teresa
Chrissie
Chrissie