You have this smile,
carefree, but sincere
so revealing
like as if there's just that
little bit more sparkle
in your life.
You have this way
of looking at me
when you want
me to see that you mean
what you say when you say
that you're mine.
Your eyes are intense
and unblinking,
just staring straight at me
so that I understand.
You have this touch
so close and warm
that even when
we're just kidding
it seems like something more
than just two people acting
just like friends.
You have this way
of convincing me
that you want me
when sometimes I'm afraid
that you don't.
I'm afraid that you're
going to hurt me
like the others have done.
But you don't.
You smile at me,
look at me,
touch my hand
and tell me we're fine.
And we are.
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Reviewed by Dan
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
it was like that alot, and it could be like that again, if i hadnt been so late
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Lovely, truly lovely to read such refreshing work, you write so effortlessly, well done...Mark ...
Reviewed by Claire Shaw (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Pretty
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2003
Very pretty, very soft and mellow and full of loving ideas. Really good poetry. Bill Murray
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2003
Hey Chuck!!!
You've been busy today!
I like this one...reminds me of the Billy Joel song "She's Got a Way"
-James
Reviewed by Jesus
Reviewed on January 9, 2003
Wow ! This is amazing luv, but what can we expect ? :D I mite actually try to make this into a song, its certainly good enough. Well done :D
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You've been busy today!
I like this one...reminds me of the Billy Joel song "She's Got a Way"
-James