I wonder if you care so much,
or if you just pretend,
I wonder if you mean it when
you say we'll never end.
I wonder why you kiss my hand
and why you kiss my face
and why you like to stand so close
although there's lots of space.
I wonder why you tell me that
I'm everything to you,
I wonder if you mean it when
you say you're being true .
I wonder why you smile at me
and never make me cry
and why you call me beautiful
although it makes me shy.
I wonder why you say so much
that you love me more
than anybody ever loved
a girl like me before.
I wonder if when you say
you love me, that you do?
I hope someday, I'll trust myself
to fall in love with you...
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Reviews of "Innocence"
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2003
Mighty fine piece-
When it's time to lose the innocence, it will be lost- and replaced by something else just as fine- self knowledge. Thanks-gal-Jerry-
Reviewed by Eugene Capper
Reviewed on February 7, 2003
innocence is a thing only want once we've lost it. great poem, i suppose we can wonder about things all we want, can we wonder if we'll ever know. sounds like a sceptic poem so full of doubt, but is it better to try something with the risk of getting hurt or not to tr anything at all? untill you try you shall always wonder. great poem, truelly magnificent.i hope one day you'll lean to trust.
eugene.
Reviewed by David Campbell Jr. (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2003
Charlotte,
Loved this poem. I've found myself wondering the same things before. Great write!
I liked this one much better than your, "Afraid to Fall," one. It was so much more... I don't know. Had more oomph to it ;) Good write. I know how you feel. You'll either regret it and never forgive yourself for falling or you'll fall so hard you'll cry forever ;) Ha ha.
Good, good write!
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Charley,
Nicely written....BUT...
STOP WITH THE WONDERING!!!!
Don't look a gift horse in the mouth.....lol.
Just kidding...
-James
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When it's time to lose the innocence, it will be lost- and replaced by something else just as fine- self knowledge. Thanks-gal-Jerry-
eugene.
Loved this poem. I've found myself wondering the same things before. Great write!
Good, good write!
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Nicely written....BUT...
STOP WITH THE WONDERING!!!!
Don't look a gift horse in the mouth.....lol.
Just kidding...
-James