You crawling, lying, waste of space
I can't believe I lost all trace
of everything I always knew
and gave my weakened heart to you.
You careless, useless, hopeless fool
I can't believe I broke my rule.
I look at you and dared ignore
the things I knew you'd do for sure.
You're cheating, creeping, guilty now
I didn't see those things somehow.
Don't you dare expect me to
come running back, or wait for you.
You don't have the slightest clue
what all your lies have put me through
well you can't win, you bastard you
just wait and see what I can do.
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Reviews of "All Your Lies"
Reviewed by Dan
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Sorry..........So Sorry
Reviewed by Jamez
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
brill charley..tell em wat you are going and wat he has done and that hes a pimp wannabe, or i will...
Reviewed by Jesus
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Well what can I say ? I think you've said it all luv, definately one of your best poems ever, I know you'll find Mr Almost-Right v soon anywayz darlin :D
Right on, girl! This is my poem to my latest ex. Exactly. Wow..
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
Amazing write very good.
peggy
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
Gee Charley....tell him how you really feel!...LOL.
Like I told you earlier, I'm sure you'll bounce back.
..."Next please!"
-J
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
I feel the pain in this Charlotte. IT is wonderful to write it out..I know..writing is a wonderful healing tool.It helped me through my grief..Floria
Reviewed by Amanda Fousek (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
Wow! Amazingly strong words. I really liked this piece. I've been there too, most of us have. Put it to the page rather then giving him conrol of such emotions. Great job.
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Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
peggy
Like I told you earlier, I'm sure you'll bounce back.
..."Next please!"
-J