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Don't Whisper That Good Night (repost - revised)
by Carmen Ruggero → (All Poetry by Carmen Ruggero)
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* Don’t Whisper That Good Night
By Carmen Ruggero


Whith thanks to Dylan Thomas for the inspiration.


Don’t you dare just fade out of sight!
An ambiguous exit is not your style.
Proud, indomitable, your mind unbent
by persuasion of any kind;
inflexible, cruel -- kind at times,
yet always your own;
never afraid to speak aloud.


Don’t you dare just fade away:
To walk from light to misty gray,
looking right through me
as if I were glass;
denying my presence, rejecting my touch.
Crimson the rage that burns my spirit!
You should have the nerve to turn your back.


You’ve concealed you passion well, and now
you, who gave me breath, your own
blood – my blood, my life,
gut my shell with honed indifference,
oh, no! you will not melt as ice!


We’ve differences to settle.
Words you’ve spoken cut through my heart;
replies hang from my tongue –
halted by your stabbing stare.
You wouldn’t have listened had I spoken
then. You need to hear me now,
before the night falls, quickly,
please hear the verses from this frail heart.


I’m not vapor. I’m not air. I’m not glass.
Like substance flows through your vessel
as it does through mine; see the likeness
in our spirit, see me first,
then face the light, and claim your peace.
Stand up and shout your final goodbye:
Don't you whisper that good night!


Carmen Ruggero .2003 & 2004


* “Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night”  by Dylan Thomas

 

 


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 Reviews of "Don't Whisper That Good Night (repost - revised)"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Don’t you dare just fade out of sight!
An ambiguous exit is not your style.

Carmen....exceptional write....cheers...Thanks for guiding me...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Dylan is smiling somewhere - an outstanding job of grabbing the emotion and angst of a relationship (family or otherwise).

~Rose~

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
I agree a great pleasure to read you Carmen..

I'll have to catch up on a few......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
God I wish I could count the times of irreputable dispute among old friends and lovers. This one was ALL that Sis!

blessin's and Smiles!
cynth'ya

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Wonderful write, Carmen..best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
W o n d e r f u l. You do your grandfather's memory
proud. B r a v a !!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Excellent write.

Reviewed by Ann Piatt
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
You worked this very nicely...and though inspired by Dylan Thomas...there was a definite unique voice here. :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
excellent exchange of poetic motif ...

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
OUTSTANDING WORK CARMEN!!!!
WOW, a true pleasure to read! Love the craft and style!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
Fascinating poem, with a strong-colored imagery of confrontational life situations. Love & happiness, Franz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
Very nicely done indeed, Carmen. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
Stunning poem Carmen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2004
Carmen, in this poem you let them know quickly you are a personage to be dealt with; not someone to be detached with just a touch of the shoulder. Great images and deep. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
Incredibly entertaing imagery and wordplay. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
I love the play in this one it is excellent and emotional a very strong voice Carmen.....

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
Stunning poem, Carmen! Your strong commanding
phrases are beautifully expressed! Powerful
brilliant work!Kudo's!

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
You've done an excellent job of capturing the essence of that relationship. Good job.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
"...gut my shell with honed indifference."

A brilliant line in a brilliant poem!!!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2004
Salutations Author-Poet Carmen Ruggero.

Greetings.

This just blew me away, Poet!! Absolutely wonderful!! I love the deep, intense emotions You expressed!! They just jump right off the page… and Wham!! Great write!!

My Gratitude, Respect and Admiration.

Thomas Lanechanger


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