Very effective, the way you did this. The repitition of certain words worked well -- somewhat recreated the effect of someone stumbling on rapid flowing thoughts. I liked this poem and its message, very much.
At the young of age of seven, Jill's mother Eve takes her for regular sessions to a child psychologist for treatment of her anxiety, which only makes her behavior worse. When she reaches her teens, she starts drinking and then smoking marijuana with
This book is an autobiographical account of the lessons I learned about life and how I was able to apply them to inspire, motivate and empower others in my own work as a firefighter, as well in my daily life as a husband, a father and a man. When I w
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Great write John......
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