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I Was Young and Full of Myself
by john k zimmerman → (All Poetry by john k zimmerman)
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a sor of companion piece to "The Faded Jacket"



He met me on the street,
common sort, callused hands,
blue jeans, “You’re the poet,”
he said. “You wrote about
a faded jacket... How’d you know?”

We ducked into the pub.


“How’d you know?
How’d you about her?”

I told him that like most of my poems
it was made out of bits and pieces,
chance remarks and whole cloth…

“I was young and full of myself,”
he began
“and she was so beautiful,
so full of life:
Smart, funny, sexy.
Sounds dumb, sound trite all these years on

“I promised her, I promised her,
I promised her the earth
and the moon
and the sea
and the sky
I promised her forever
then we sailed away
I promised to return.”

“I meant to, too.”

“But life got complicated
I moved up the ladder
leading seaman, Bosun’s mate
Bosun...

I left thee sea and married
three kids complicates
your life"

He ordered another round.

“soccer, hockey, ballet,
sailing ...

“But late at night. I see those stars,
hear those combers rolling
up that beach
and far up the strand I see

I see her …”

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 Reviews of "I Was Young and Full of Myself"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 22, 2005
Bittersweetly compelling, John. Thank you. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Excellent, John! I enjoyed the memories; and the regrets of what could have been and never was, and would never be known. Very well done! Joyce

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
I enjoyed this poetic sailors tale John, very well told!

Eileen

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2005

Really Really well written .......TALENT GALORE!
PEACE',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed on August 19, 2005
John,

An excellent reminiscence...hauntingly portrayed regret. VERY well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Very well written story/poem John!!

Bittersweet in some way!!

Love Tinka


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