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memories (tanka)
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wind across the lake,
sun bleached driftwood and pebbles,
memories on shore--
long gone days of sun bleached fun
flown away, smoke on the wind

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my first crack at a tanka

31 syllables 5\7\5\7\7

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 Reviews of "memories (tanka)"
Reviewed by Glen Lovelace
Reviewed on April 13, 2004
Oft' recurring moods,
return to me our childhood:
"once upon a time"
when memories are simple,
definitions intrinsic!
GDL (I-MAGE)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
John,
I have never tried this form, but I agree with Peggy...you did it with ease!

Very Good!

Hugs and Happy New Year,
Maria

Reviewed by Nancy
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
Left me with a beautiful image.
Many warm hugs
Nancy

Reviewed on December 29, 2002
Good one!!!!!

~ Sandie and Buddy ~

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
Tanka you John for this little shortie. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
Don't know what a 'tanka' is, but then, I'm just a country poet. Somebody's idea of elegance, I guess. Does it communicate?

Reviewed on December 29, 2002
i'm still learning the different forms poetry takes...if this is a first attempt, it's an outstanding one! great tanka, john! happy new year, (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
First Time at Tanka?
this great, beautiful, I have yet to try Tanka, I've written Haiku and Tetractys, looking foward to my first Tanka.

William


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