the faded sun
has touched the world
with its orange glory
and slid away
leaving
lingering twilight.
I await the night
of undawning dark
the silent,
unbroken
dark of
hopeless night.
the diffused grey
dusk holds
the promise of
too many
false hopes
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An artifact of a rough time --- this was written sometime 1970-71 --- after an evening storm -- i was working toll on the whirlpool rapids bridge , a dark grimy hole, two layers down from the sky.
I've altered the form but not the content ---
for some reason, long forgotten, I titled more than a few poems written at that time in french.
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Reviewed by sophie merrick (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
this is beautiful ill certainly be reading more of your poems
Hey John this is perfect...as all of your works are perfect...this is unique and i liked the concept...like u always say...this is clever write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
You Cannot Hope,Wish Nor Pray, All You Can Do Is Make Best Of What You Got Today!
If People Do Not Learn From Their Problems, They Got Nobody to Blame But, Themselves,i.e.
Of Course Fate, Politic's Religion Will Deceive You As All Otherwise...
The Gest Of It All Is To Never (Quit)Give Up...
As I've Always Stated: In Your Face...
TRASK
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
full of visions, thoughts of maybe`s.......loved it John
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Jenni
A great powerful write
Trixie
You Cannot Hope,Wish Nor Pray, All You Can Do Is Make Best Of What You Got Today!
If People Do Not Learn From Their Problems, They Got Nobody to Blame But, Themselves,i.e.
Of Course Fate, Politic's Religion Will Deceive You As All Otherwise...
The Gest Of It All Is To Never (Quit)Give Up...
As I've Always Stated: In Your Face...
TRASK
very good write.
Peggy
william
Fantastic imagery and
powerful emotion.