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Till Break Of Day
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"Till Break Of Day" Beneath a moonlit sky Against the darkness of the west I paused to listen�carefully With heart and soul Deep within I hear songs that comes to me From far beyond the deep blue sea Angel spirit of night and sea Laugh out loud In the darkness of the night Two dimensions East the light West the darkness of the night While the touch of nature echoes in my mind Where sand and ocean meet again The music harmonizing with my heart beat Like ebb and flow Not making a stay Keeps running away As my pain goes to sleep Beneath a moonlit sky Against the darkness of the west I never loved another As much as I love You I will walk away From this moment of solitude The moment I see the break of day Copyright �2005 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2005

Beautiful work. And the picture gets you thinking once again.

Bob H

Reviewed by John Bidwell

I want to say something to capture how beautiful this is...
But for some reason it just occurs to me to tell you you are kicking poetic butt.
Great job Tinka.
John

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Ah this is excellent Tinka...beautiful.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Beautiful writing Tinka!

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Paul Nipperess BMin

:) ..... nice work, Tinka ..... :)

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Wow- That's Awesome....Alot to think about here... I like how you write Tinka... Truly-Lady,Sheee P.S. Thanks 4 your kind comments on my poetry too.. :) Have a WARm and Inspiring Day!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 3, 2005

ah, the break of day when our dreams come to rest and the sea soothes our hope ... have to agree, one of your best!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

I have to agree Tinka....one of your best, a grogeous

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Beautiful images, a wonderful poem. Henry

Reviewed by A PAX

Very good tinka :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

One of your best Tinka! A surreal quality that takes
the imagination on a trip of its own. Beautifully done!

en-ami~Alrisha

Reviewed by Dale Clark

A beauty Tinky! Very good piece!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

You did quite well on this poem.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Tinka, this is absolutely beautiful! Mysterious and dramatic as only you can create it. Brava!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

beautifully written tinka, hope the storm is a small one

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Dear Readers and friends...I will read you in the morning...some heavy storm here and I want to go down line befor I blow my modem yet again!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

So deep; so meaningful; so resounding; so profound - all exceptionally blended together to create one poetic masterpiece after another ... brilliant!!

Blessings my friend,

Robert

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Oh my, Tinka this one defies attempts to review it as it is so pure and hopelessly romantic. You have a style that arouses the romantics in all of us, please don't ever let that fade from your heart.

Felix

From far beyond the deep blue sea