Haunting write that chills the bones, William, very well written!. I think there are entities that sometimes almost become manifest and it's their strength of trying makes the air thicker and if we're in it's vicinity we feel like we've been touched or embraced. I've had it happen and that's how I felt.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
Wow, what a fright
I was walking one time, and it felt like something had a hold of my back, but nothing was there. Scary, maybe it was a demon.
Great write William.....
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
William this was so chilling...
I am glad you ended it like you did...
it was a release for me at the end...
great writing...floria
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
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powerful poem!
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love Tinka
Nancy
I was walking one time, and it felt like something had a hold of my back, but nothing was there. Scary, maybe it was a demon.
Great write William.....
I am glad you ended it like you did...
it was a release for me at the end...
great writing...floria