The fourth paragraph says it..."Time flew etc"... As time does rarely every really fly, but seems to do in this life we have, we know not the reason why, and I bet I know who it was you spoke or was spoken too, a certain Dark Angel, taking the soul and granting long life...Peace thru the Written Word, Ed & Rufuz
great write..food for thought..
Vesna :)
it is truly powerful and gripping..well done..
floria
Powerfully penned - one great poem (Teddy Roosevelt would have been proud!).
Robert
Great lines with a powerful meaning...
Beautifully penned!
Love, Sheila
Of a life time of love
Ceased, no longer mine
My children, all aged
Are deceased.
William...yet another powerful write from you...I admire your works so much....you are always a pleasure to read...love n luck...BHUWAN
Love & Hugs Tinka
Reindeer
Poet!
My guess is that The Great Poet was calling You to write the closing line of Your earthly VERSE!
I Salute You Sublime One!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is one excellent write...
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