The powerful images you depict are so vivd they
give me the chills just to think about such a way
of life! Excellent write William!Sad that people
must live this way.
This is the best view of the ghetto I've listened to since Elvis' "In the Ghetto."
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
It sounds like a really horrible place to be..
I have seen it in movies but never first hand..
and don't think I want to..you wrote brilliantly
about it william...floria
i work in a ghetto and your images and insight are right on the mark!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
WOWOWOWO William captured the Ghetto so surreal.
Excellent peom....
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
As a participant in law enforcement, you saw "the works,"
I'll bet, Bill. Yes, life can get ugly in the ghetto. I never
lived there, but I knew a family who did, and was lucky enough
to get out, before all of them were dead.
Happier sights to you, Bill.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
A hard look at reality here William.
Aweful this all goes on...
In being raised I was very lucky
when I think about it.
Have a great Sat. night William....
This describes far too many places in our ever-decaying inner cities. Instead of rejuvinating and revitalizing our industrialized cities, man just builds, builds, builds in the once 'green belt.' Our noble cities, and their citizens deserve much better.
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This is a horrible place to be in. I hope you will get out of there soon. Very descriptive write.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Reindeer
give me the chills just to think about such a way
of life! Excellent write William!Sad that people
must live this way.
Nancy
I have seen it in movies but never first hand..
and don't think I want to..you wrote brilliantly
about it william...floria
Excellent peom....
I'll bet, Bill. Yes, life can get ugly in the ghetto. I never
lived there, but I knew a family who did, and was lucky enough
to get out, before all of them were dead.
Happier sights to you, Bill.
Aweful this all goes on...
In being raised I was very lucky
when I think about it.
Have a great Sat. night William....
This describes far too many places in our ever-decaying inner cities. Instead of rejuvinating and revitalizing our industrialized cities, man just builds, builds, builds in the once 'green belt.' Our noble cities, and their citizens deserve much better.
All too true , I fear.
Well done,
john+