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Hoardy Eyes
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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Our eyes met
Twice that night
We both knew
It wasn't right
Yet our eyes met
Twice that night
While others
Were out of sight.

He was there
She was there
All we could do
That day
Was to transmit
An occasional stare.

Now I find myself
Alone this day
wondering
If I had asked you
Would you have stayed?

Our eyes met
Twice that night
I am surrounded
With the loneliness
Of this room
Wishing into the future
When one day
I might say
I knew her all too well
Our eyes met
Twice that night.

By: William Bonilla
7/05/04

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 Reviews of "Hoardy Eyes"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 13, 2004
lost opportunity echoes in our minds ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Augh!!!
So sad.
A love unconditioned plagues the memory forever.
Great way to put it!!
Susan

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Mystery and intrigue! Agony over lost opportunity? Well done, William!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
He who hesitates is lost! However, I also believe that sometimes a check in the spirit works to our benefit! Wonderful poem William!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
So bittersweet, beautiful write, William.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Wow...this touched me.
I often wonder at the chances we miss when we could have gotten to know someone and didn't. This poem says it all, my friend. A keeper!

~Linda

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
A beautiful write, Bill, as always, although the last line in the third paragraph I might change to "Would you have stayed?", but then again there is such a thing as poetic license...Peace always, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Interesting when things like this happen, and often food for thought.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Twice as good.......lol!!

Love Tinka :)


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