Last day on the beach
Warn humid cloudy morning
At a distance
I hear, the 60's oldies playing
Bringing memories
Of happier days.
From partially cloudy skies
A seagull, falls from grace
Onto the sand
She now lays
On her open grave
I close my eyes
To disregard the scene
Pray for better days.
A sadness is in the air
The presence of loss
Laughter seems to fade from within
Dried petals upon the ground
Of blossoming flowers.
A chill in the air
Where once was warm
The sun covered by clouds
Sandy beaches, now deserted
Quietness so still.
Beautifully written by two wonderful poets...william and Floreann
You eally captured the mood that is both sad for summer to be over,and hopeful for the beauty of fall to come.
Yes!! Celebrating summer's departure and thoughts of the cold north eastern winds blowing in off the Atlantic....jjust reminds me of mother nature and her desire to change cloths and us...along for the ride. I love deserted beaches, only my footprints instead of me walking upon others and the way seagulls seem to fly in the same spot when going against the wind. I love the power. I love your poem because it reminds me of this and what is coming.
Susan
A touching reminder you two about the changing of seasons. The time will soon come when frost will fall upon the ground once more.
Excellent visions you've penned so tenderly.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Share
Print
Save
Follow
Gina
FOR YOUR WONDERFUL CONTIBUTION
TO THIS PIECE.
WILLIAM ....PEACE
You eally captured the mood that is both sad for summer to be over,and hopeful for the beauty of fall to come.
And I, too, always feel a tinge of sadness at summer's eventual departure, and at the first hint of chill in the air.
Well Done!
Love Tinka
Where once was warm
The sun covered by clouds
Sandy beaches, now deserted
Quietness so still.
Such lovely writing~*
Touches ones vision with beautiful scenery!
Susan
Excellent visions you've penned so tenderly.
Lisa