This is most certainly my favourite time of the year, yet it can often be the saddest and loneliest time too. Your last stanza really choked me up, very sad reflections William, however still well written.
When my children were younger I used to tell them stories and I always knew when I had hit the spot when I would see tears in their eyes. You hit the spot with this one. I am wiping tears from my face right now. I love a poem that elicits such deep emotion.
How many dreams lie shattered in cardboard boxes on our streets.
Thank you William. Your heart shines through.
Chanti
that rattlesnake has quite a bite... that we all might share something of our gratitude by giving where we can to help those less fortunate. thanks for this,
M.Rose
This is most certainly my favourite time of the year, yet it can often be the saddest and loneliest time too. Your last stanza really choked me up, very sad reflections William, however still well written.
warm hugs
Elga
sad yet hopeful feeling to this
take care
When my children were younger I used to tell them stories and I always knew when I had hit the spot when I would see tears in their eyes. You hit the spot with this one. I am wiping tears from my face right now. I love a poem that elicits such deep emotion.
How many dreams lie shattered in cardboard boxes on our streets.
Thank you William. Your heart shines through.
Chanti
Very well penned!!
Love Tinka
sueb