The Shower (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on December 25, 2004

Not much left that can beat a hot shower on a cold winter's day!!!
Good one !

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 24, 2004

A wonderful look at what a shower can do, William. Thank you. Best wishes of love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on December 24, 2004

Nice take on a shower.
Nice write!!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on December 24, 2004

Um, I almost said something terribly naughty, but then I remembered site rules and regulations. My inner nature stifled, I'll simply comment, lovely, William.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 24, 2004

nothing lika nice hot shower Wiliam. you captured it very well here poetically. Yes you're right, when I was on the street seems like more people got hurt during the holidays than any other time also. G

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

such a sensuous write!

Happy Holidays to you..in and out of the shower.

Gina

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

That was one heck of a shower, now all I wanna know is how did the towel rub go LOL.

Ty for the Smile WILLIE hehe
Ch'erie

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

Amusing write, William. Don't forget to moisturize afterwards!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

Well I must say you convinced me to go and shower earlier. My favorite pooch likes to poke his head into the water but then he is a goofy lab that likes water anyway.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

Is this the adult version of the movie - Free Willy?!

PS It's 20 Below with the Wind Chill here this morning - I need a very hot shower.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

A very refreshing well-penned poetic cleansing of the body and soul! Outstanding work. Happy Holidays to you and yours, Poet.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

Now thats called a "thingy " taking a shower....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

Here we can just go outside for a shower.

Tigger? HUH?

Good write willie..

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

William, There is nothing as refreshing as a first thing in the morning shower...unless it's a shared first thing in the morning shower!
Happy Holidays!

Lisa

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

William ,who doesn't love a shower even though I don't have a "blessed willy";-) Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

very interesting William.....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

From my chest
The warm cascading continues
Passed the blessed
Willie.

lol! you've got showering down to a science ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

thank God I wasn't incarecrated
when I thought of this one
are you guys talking from experience????
LOL

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Just don't bend over for the soap...and you think its cold there, you ought to live in a motorhome with little to NO insulation in the walls and especially the floors...THAT IS COLD!! ed

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Check the spelling of the second word in the first line. This is a good write. Made me miserably cold, though.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Freedom's a valuable thing William...'cause you don't have to worry if you drop the soap :)

Merry Christmas and be well.

EDL