The Doorbell rings
I peer through the peep hole
Two huge men I see
Crew cuts, wearing white jackets
Finally
They've come for me
I thought
I stealtily escaped
Out the back door
Unseen, unheard, thank God
I once talked to a man
While laying on a couch
Said a few things
He didn't comprehend
Explained about shadows
Once seen in a dream
Of lines crossing intersections
On flowers and twigs
Branches of trees and prints
On forest walls
Shades that formed shapes
In my head
While trying to sleep
Resting on my bed
He prescribe a pill
To sedate me instead
Suggesting an appointment
To visit him at his asylum
No way Jose
Will I be sedated
My words might be misinterpret
Placing me, in the security
Of a cuckoo's nest
So he can Pay
For his new Benz
He won't be writing down
My slurs
Of sedated speech
And unfocused thoughts
Twisting them
Into his own selfish ends
While driving away in his new Benz
My wife answered the doorbell
They were delivering
Her new Couch.
William....fantastic write my friend....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2005
You know what you are correct on that in that most of them do want to pay for their new Benz. However do not tell either the men in black or white that I am really hiding out with Moses in the desert. I am still trying to find my mind.
Very Good, William! As you look for the two men in white, I look for the two Men in Black, always figuring they will take me to some hidden alien spacecraft - for min and body probing. Now, I will probably run from men in both black and white!
Glad to see you finally got that couch I sent down...it comes with its own therapist, he will be sent next...most likely he will arrive wrapped in a plain brown paper wrapper...;) Ed
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2005
Good for you..
The new couch is much better...
Great one William...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2005
I laughed so loud at the last line, think I may have woken next door up.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Oh you had me going LOL
One of the best needed this :D
LOL
Love and hugs, Carole
Love Tinka
love,
eileen
The new couch is much better...
Great one William...
I just love this. Gotta keep it..