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The Gambler's Dream
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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He sat to my left side
He did, my friend
At a poker table,
He buried his eyes
'Neath the visor
Of his baseball cap
causing his eyes to lurk
In the shadow of his face
I was ahead
With piles of winning chips
The stares
He aimed in my direction
Which I caught
Were like daggers of hate
As he murmured
deep hollow songs
To himself
Of treachery and sincereness
I would say
I was holding my own
As his friend
One he would soon
Like to disown.

He bet heavy
On four of a kind
I was holding all spades
From the "ten to the ace"
Yes blest
With a royal flush
he went all in
I was the only player
To bet against him.
He showed his cards
I showed mine
He stormed out upright
Was the last time I saw him
Since that night.

A friend
Turned out to be a sore loser
loser of a soul
A life long friendship
Ended that unluck night
Unlucky for him
Now he is lost
In the twilight of a dream
He never woked from
The gamblers dream
Where Kenny Rogers said
A gambler braeks even.

By William Bonilla
03/30/05

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 Reviews of "The Gambler's Dream"
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Once again William, your pen has created an interesting tale...it is an area I know nothing about...guess I don't have the heart of a gambler...I want a return on my money...great write friend..
Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
I never gambled, at least not in poker or cards of any type...I use the one arm bandits every now and again, but no more than once a year as I have had enough vices and addictions in my life, I don't need another! ED

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Poker can truly be a wonderful pastime - and it can truly make bitter enemies - I've experienced both!

Reviewed by Li Smith
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
In the twilight of a dream ... beautiful imagery, sorry about your friend!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
in dreams a gambler will break even ... in reality, if you don't like to lose don't gamble ...

superbly crafted poem ...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
A different twist on the old song. I agree that some dreams are really something else.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Ouch! I know how he must have felt, losing that hand! I sometimes watch Texas Hold'em on TV. It's "safer" that way, hahaha! Nice write, William!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Yup. The dreams to stay clear of...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Hey do you want to gamble with the good one???

No tricky thingy promise!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Excellent story/poem William. Funny how all the things parents warn us of as bad, turn out to be right.;-) lust, drink, gambling, all ways to lose friends and influence no one;-) Sad that some are such poor losers!

Eileen

Reviewed on March 30, 2005
good tale within this poem; well done, william!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

no, i don't gamble; can't stand it! and this after winning money on bingo twice and almost winning money another time! LOL

Reviewed on March 30, 2005
Bill,

Great moral here in your story poem; well written!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)


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