Who Is Riding That Cloud (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Grab one of those clouds William, you might find the trip worthwhile, even though it's going nowhere. I just came back from a 1000 mile trip of driving. First time ever, I went to get out of my car after about 300 miles of driving and my legs wouldn't hold me. I almost fell to the ground. New one for me. I'm doing better now though. G

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

Wonderful emotive writing..I love to lie on the ground and just watch the clouds moving past me..Yeah, is is the simple things........

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

An stunning look at melancholy, as we have all had our own dance with him...very poignant write my dear friend....

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

Contemplative states are good for the soul. Self-examination helps us grow, and if we don't have a sense of sadness about our past, then we're probably looking at it through rose-colored glasses for we've all done something that we could have done better. An honest write, William. States of melancholy are only sickness when they last too long, prevent us from moving forward. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

Humans= the fools; planet earth = our ship. too bad we still don't get it. Love this write, William; suits my mood just fine. Melancholia is a much maligned state of being... Well done.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

a moving, wistful poem ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

We all, if we live long enough, come down with sever cases of melancholy thoughts from time to time. Looking back on those carefree days that seem to elude us in these later years. Nostalgia! Ah, yes.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

well done

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

Straight from from your beautiful heart my friend!!

Hey that thingy called melancholy bugs me too...hugs!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle

Reviewed on April 15, 2005

I like the honesty. it reminds me of what i just now am in the middle of writing.

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield

Reviewed on April 15, 2005

William
Keep writing...It is a great release and it helps to soothe the soul. I love the title, too!
Antoinette

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 15, 2005

Dontcha' just hate those damn clouds that are basically freeloading off the wind, floating along without so much as a thank you to old Mom Nature and not allowing any angels to share the ride...? Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 15, 2005

Clouds are in my poem tonight too William.;-) Keep that mind active, don't dwell in melancholy too long;-)...Great poem, I can relate!

Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 15, 2005

Clouds often speak to me as well, William. Thank you for sharing these thoughts to which I can connect. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 15, 2005

It's a nice way to be. I do that too sometimes. Good write, William!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)