Les Miserable (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

My Goodness, This is such a horrifying and stunning poem of truth. The flashbacks and haunting things seen, the elements of quickly life can really be, but there is always one thing to hold onto when thinking of things like these is that they are at peace and the clock of life is each our own although I know that doesn't take away the horrid pictures Let the peace they feel be given to you through them and the love of all in your life who care about you bring you peace and love. This poem has a very powerful message it carries of how being in a hurry, hastened, not paying attention is the cause and so important to remember to quit being aka slow down. I send all my Peaceful thoughts to you to carry you through these times and all times. 42xoox every day! from me and mine to you!
Tracey

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Like looking through the portals of unknown terrors!
Superb write William!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Gad, Bill, this is a window to the dark places that haunt the soul. Chillingly effective, I pray this isn't your current state...a gutpunching, starkly terrifying write, VERY well written and imaged. BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Chillingly compelling, William. Makes the reader think. Take care. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Oh, William... though there is nothing 'pleasant' in this remarkable piece of poetry, it is a bold commentary on that dark place within us all... you may paint this without pastels, but you have, indeed, delivered a crusher that is masterful and will linger, I assure you. I'm keeping it to remind myself that great poetry may not be about topic, but about honesty and guts. katy xox

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

deeply provocative and disturbing in mood ... use your imagination, think positive thoughts and they will return ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

This is like a collage of flash backs from your job, eloquently written. Very dark and powerful offering William, hope this does not reflect your mood! Be well and happy...

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Oh boy imagery so vivd it's like living the horror of the moment.

Peace to a worried tormented soulful spirit like yourself my frind!!

I guess dealing with this kind of horror on a daily basis can only be a haunting memory for life!!

Love & hugs Tinka

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

So very dark and chilling, this hits to the core,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

William:

I guess with you being in the profession that you previously were in, you must have seen a lot of tragedies. Sometimes, you take home someone else's stress and misery.

Hope you are recuperating much better now from all that.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Dark, haunting, and very powerful, William.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

dark and depressing. Very expressive. I, too, hope you're OK

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 29, 2005

I have one statement regarding the guy cleaning his weapon...bet when it went off and shot him, he was then the first to know there was a round in the chamber...beyond that, this is so depressing for you, Bill, are you okay? Hope you are well, Ed