I Just Fell" (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 4, 2005

contrasting emotions, dynamic imagery, fantastic writing! I hope all is well--I hate to fall, the older I get, the harder it is to get over the ramifications.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on August 4, 2005

Exeptional contrast mixed superbly...Excellent

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 4, 2005

The juxtaposition of the "then" and "now" make this poem very effective, William. Thank you. Love, peace, and strength to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 4, 2005

This is a fascinating use of now and then, you blended them beautifully as only your talented pen can do!

Love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on August 4, 2005

Such a fascinating read! Very good, William.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 4, 2005

William,
Being a parent, never turns us loose. Even as we age and we should probably be thinking about our own health and well being, still it is them we first bring to mind.
I certainly hope all is well with you.
Stunning write in timeless tidbits.

Lisa

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

Skillfully meshed time-lapsed events, William. Those falls can be tricky as time goes by... Hope all is well, Poet!
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

What a fall!...and it has brought back nice memories for you. We'll never know and predict when and where we would get our inspirations from. EXCELLENT write, William!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

a fanatstic poem of contrasting events brought into unison ... top notch!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

An intriguing and procative write, William. Also, great pic on the bio page. Who's the cute kid with you in the boat? :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

I always enjoy your work. This is, in opinion, one of your best.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

An incredible write...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

Maked me think of the TARDIS. And Dr Who..
Most intelligent write.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

Fantastic work, William. I love the time travel
Hope youre OK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

A fascinating 'time play' poem, and I truly hope you're OK, William.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

WOW, William, you twisted me in so many directions with this marvelous poem. Surreal and captivating, I couldn't stop reading. I hope this isn't a true story and if it is, I hope that you are ok.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

William this is an exceptional poem! The interchange of times
is beautifully done and it's so touching! I hope if this happened
that you are okay. You must be home if you're posting,let us know
how you are. I'll keep you in prayer anyway!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

Outstanding poem and intereting shift of time
Hope you're OK
love and peace

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

oh, dear, i hope all is well, bill; you are in my prayers! i can relate; but i usually just laugh it off. i always tell people if i fall and i then start laughing, then all is well; it's when i don't laugh is when they should start worrying. take care, my friend, and be careful!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

Oh my...I truly hope you okay my dear friend!!

Please take care okay!!

This is scary but very well penned for sure!!

Love Tinka