Where is that shooting star
Rushing to
I often wonder that is true
Is she lonely
Like I and you
Oh! Will someone tell me
Where is that shooting star
Rushing to
Will she find, or is there
Someone on the other side
Waiting for her
Where is that shooting star
Rushing to
How long will ever be
Before we see another
Shooting star
Falling towards you
Where is that shooting star
Rushing to?
By: William Bonilla
09/18/05
To: A special Friend on the other side of the world
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Reviewed by sarah playle (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
*L* I don't think I'll look at a shooting star the same anymore. I'll always been wondering where "It's rushing too"
Reviewed by G Morrison
Reviewed on September 25, 2005
I guess it's out of control William, one thing for sure, it'll end up somewhere, we know where your poem ended up. iN ALL our heads
What do they say about that "great mind thingy" that thinks alike?
Here's right back at you!!
" Shooting Star "
A star
Is like
Our heart
At the time
At which you die
For it shoots
It falls down
When your heart
Falls down
Falling from the throat
From the hollow
Of your throat
It shoots
When we die
For it knows
The time when we die
The star knows the time
When our heart
No longer
Breathes
It shoots
Fall down
As a heart fall down
And the star’s noise
Dying away
It takes your heart away
When ever you see a shooting star
Know
Another heart has
Died
When in its darkness
Stars look like
Fire
That burns
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What do they say about that "great mind thingy" that thinks alike?
Here's right back at you!!
" Shooting Star "
A star
Is like
Our heart
At the time
At which you die
For it shoots
It falls down
When your heart
Falls down
Falling from the throat
From the hollow
Of your throat
It shoots
When we die
For it knows
The time when we die
The star knows the time
When our heart
No longer
Breathes
It shoots
Fall down
As a heart fall down
And the star’s noise
Dying away
It takes your heart away
When ever you see a shooting star
Know
Another heart has
Died
When in its darkness
Stars look like
Fire
That burns
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