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The Fan
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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I sit on a sofa
Head resting on two cushions
Gazing aimlessly
At a ceiling Fan
Watching it shuffling
The light and shadows
Like fluffy egg whites
Being folded into a cake mix
Hence
Extracting a brezze
That presently comforts my face
Beneath the warm sweat.

I can hear my siblings
Carried away
By a contest we made up
Laughing and having fun
Their laughter
Filtered through my mind
As my eyes rolled
Into the back of my head
I am surrounded by their laughter
It swallows me into a vortex
Where healthy laughter
Unfolds like a blossoming Rose
Into mischievious giggles
Back to the times
Of old grade school songs.

I find myself
In my childhood living room
As we sang along
I can see my mom
Cooking in the kitchen
With her eternal smile
Printed on her lovely face
My father, I saw sitting
At the table, Playing solitaire
Listening to the radio
Smoking a long Paul Mall
An ash tip two inches long
Which never hit the ground
He cup his butt, with one hand
Shaking it into an ashtray
Of moments lost in time
A gentle voice
Alert me I was drifting
As I am asked to join the game.

By: William Bonilla
09/15/05

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 Reviews of "The Fan"
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on October 2, 2005
Beautiful moving memories, William! Captivating write - so well crafted - brings a smile into anybody's face.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
You have captured the moments and shared them expertly, William. Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
find myself
In my childhood living room

A truly captivating piece, William - I love nostalgic memories, and this is a very good one.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Great imagery!! L o v e the fluffy egg whites! The way you let
memory drift with the rotation of the fan and the play of light
and shadow. Evocative and memorable!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
My dear friend William...you never cease to amaze me with your poetic talent...another gem from you my talented fried who I am lucky to know in this brief life...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
William the imagery in this one is like a master painting! Vibrant and alive! One to skeep and savor, beautifully done!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Hypnotic imagery.
The fan and the egg wisk, taking you into lamenting you childhood.
Brilliant..


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 28, 2005
Awesome......this was so vividly written it pulled me right in!!

Thanks for sharing these beautiful moments!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 27, 2005
i like how you used the motion of the fan to set in motion the course of your memories ...


Reviewed on September 27, 2005
Ah William, such memories, this is so very moving, wonderfully written,

Reindeer


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