A Sleepless Night (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 1, 2006

I felt loneliness, passion and a desire in this poem. I felt the heat and no air conditioning. It sounds like you need to be cooled off.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 21, 2005

Ah William, a deeply moving poem, so very powerful are the images in this excellent poem, excellently expressed.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2005

So moody...then went to your bio page. Is that really you peeking through that vase of flowers. ROFL...
Enjoyed the read, William.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2005

Wow, this is very moody- and I know I am going to sound really odd, but the slithering part reminded me of in "When the Grinch stole Christmas," when the grinch is slithering on his stomach beneath the xmas trees :) You definately have the darkness in this peace, which really hits the reader at the end.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

This is powerfully moving even in verbal simplicity, commonplace. Left me totally feeling A Sleepless Night! This is indeed by my standards excellent work for it left a feeling intense. BRAVO!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

A thought provoking write William that pulls you in through it's many layers....powerful and deep!

love and peace...Carole

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Riveting, masterful write, William.
Peace and Light,
Carolyn

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

a finely crafted and spirited write ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

Too deep for me to make any semi-humorous statements, so I will go with the fact that this is as always one of your most recent best, enjoyed...ed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

Hmm you and George are on the same wavelength today..
We've gotta love and embrace the sunsets as we do the sunrises..

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

A very deep powerful write. I agree with Ed, though. You can rebuke those demons.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

I agree with ET, a very deep piece, William, but those demons waiting at the window only get us if we allow them to.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

You and George on the samne page today! This is another deep soulful poem William. I know that feel of demons attempting to ensnare, as sleep evades us and our minds wander.You have been reaching ever higher levels with your writing of late. Bravo!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

This you need to read over and over again to grasp the depth and intensity of the words....until it pulls you right in and keeps you there breathless and sweaty...like dope........lol...gotsha!!

Powerful stuff...no joking!!

Love Tinka