My Jewel (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 6, 2006

I wonder if my fiance looks at me as his jewel? Yes he does in everyway of the words. It feels so good to be in love you know. You have expressed this to the depths as always it is an indeed pleasure to read your work.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Quite a romantic and erotic work!

Reviewed by Bella Christopher (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Ah, William! You never disappoint. I look forward to each and every one of your writes. You are a true romantic indeed. I love the way you compare your muses features to jewels. May we all be lost in a garden of roses and jasmine.
Be well,
Penny

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

a gem of a romanitc poem ...

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

William,

This poetry is a Jewel in its own right...and obviously, only one of many, which you privilege us with a glimpse of! The truest gem is your Mrs....congratulations!

Love&Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

"My Jewel"

Wonderfully captivating.
Great work William.
Very beautiful write.
Continue your senuous writing!

Hmmm, I think it is good for a person's health(smile)
Blessings to you.
Your Friend at the Den,
Gwendolyn
ps. I admire your short stories too!

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

Oh, William...why would you want to wake up? I'm reading this again before I go to bed tonight...see if my dreams improve :o) Love this...

Micke

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Don't chock on it, she still needs it.
Be blessed and Joyful William..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

You are one big romantic heart!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Sensual and beautiful, William! You are one of the Romantics!! Well done.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

BEAUTIFUL WILLIAM..... You always write romance so beautiful.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Oh happy day!
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

((((William)))) you do have a beautiful nack for writing ectasy..This one is G-L-O-R-I-O-U-S....

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Hi William:

This is so nice! This poem has wonderful visual effect and is very romantic and tasty!!!!! I love this!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Such romantic sensuality William! Yummy! Think I'll read it again;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

William, you phrase love with the heart of a romantic poet who is steeped in desire for his intended. This is beautiful.

Susan