So many things that were so easy in childhood seem to become so much more "hidden" as we become adults. This is deep, William; and it is thought-inciting. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
I love the questions it causes the reader to ponder each set individualy,... Crafted so well William.....:)
Light & Peace,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
I thought my mirror was a great painting....your mocking bird don't
wanna mock you no more, and the others are in transition...
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
I love this William...at first I wanted to simply answer the questions somehow, then losing myself in the depth of the layers that it would take to answer that, am left pondering as to how many things have I myself become blind and deaf? Very clever write. Panda :)
You are right william. Man has been so unkind to nature for many centures and in return nature has reduced its mercy and beauty towards man. Few notice this kind of change. Great poem
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
A stellar composition, relating to the muted senses, as one ages..
only to discover our new and better ones!
Love, Rhonda
Excellent write!
Sheila
I have the reading of "The Image In The Mirror".
Healthy creative life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Regis
Light & Peace,
Joselyn
wanna mock you no more, and the others are in transition...
When you can answer to all the "why's" in this poem, that's when you will heal yourself. Now, try to answer them all...
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
You looked way tooo long at those thighs on the bike mate!!
Love Tinka