God must have been celebrating
A great occasion
When he created
The loveliness of you
~~~~*~~~~
I wondered
Where he gathered the gold
He integrated
Within the beauty
Of your long blinding
Strands of angelic hair
~~~~*~~~~
From what ocean or sea
Dared he search
Within poseidon's domain
To match the heavenly blue
Of your sensuous eye
~~~~*~~~~
What single fruit flavor
That's consistence with those
Blended in the sweet nectar
Of Ambrosia, did he select
To lace
Upon the tenderness
Of your lips
~~~~*~~~~
A smile?
I see none upon the
Brilliance
That aglow your elegance
For your precious face
Is the perfection Of His
Creation.
~~~~*~~~~
The mixing of imagery and the lexis' harmony in "Creation Of A Woman"
have shown here the brilliance of a heedful sensitive observer... This is what I call poetic excellence.
How tender your heart, D'Artagnan, for the love of your life! From the beauty of your poetry, it is certain, she is merely breathing back to you, what you have breathed into, her.
Well, if this doesn't tell her that you believe the sun rises and sets upon her, nothing will ever convence her. Beautiful and romantic, each one is breathtaking.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2006
My goodness!!! You sir William, KNOW how to charm the ladies..Hhhmmm...I have seen this in several of your works..Your spirit soars like the eagle and you always know how to touch others lives..God, why can't all men be like you??? This masterpiece is GLORIOUS dearest precious William!!! Thank YOU for allowing me to read this treasure!!
Oh wow, William. This is truly a romantic interlude of beauty. Well done, sweet friend, well done. Your words speak volumes and volumes of love.
My very warmest regards and respect,
CJ
This is a lovely and generous tribute to the beauty of woman. You have a respect for us that is appreciated and endeared by all I'm sure.
Love and peace,
Susan
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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"Creation Of A Woman"
A splendid metaphoric depiction of
a woman.
Thank you for sharing William.
Sincerely,
Gwendolyn
Chanti
Love,
Eileen
The mixing of imagery and the lexis' harmony in "Creation Of A Woman"
have shown here the brilliance of a heedful sensitive observer... This is what I call poetic excellence.
Long healthy creative life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Such Treasure here!
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Take care,
Sherry
Love & Hugs,
Dove
My very warmest regards and respect,
CJ
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
Love and peace,
Susan
Rusty
Thank you!!
Love Tinka