El Ratoncito ( The Tiny Mouse) (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

El Ratoncito ( The Tiny Mouse)
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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Hi Fellow Poets and writers This is a spoof on a very good Personal friend of mine. Written both in Spanish and English "El Ratocito" is Spanish for The "Tiny Mouse." In really he is a giant of a man standing at 5 feet nothing EL Ratoncito ~~~~~~~~ Yo conoci, en me tiempo En esta vida De poeta Un Ratoncito diminuto Que era simpatico Y ellgo el tiempo Que era una vez Y todavia es Mi mejor amigo Yo y ese Condenado Ratoncito. Que mucho le gustaba Comir queso Siempre a mi amigito El Ratocito. Yo de daba queso Y siempre me preguntaba Que eso? dice El pobrecito Ratoncito. El era un genio De todas classe de juegos Y nunca celebra Las perdidas El gusto, era mas que Ganar. Asta el dia, que conocio Y jugo, con el gato Aye! El pobrecito, Ratoncito Lo unico que de queda Es el rabito Del Pobrecito Ratoncito. By: D'Artagnan William Bonilla 10/02/06 ~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Tiny Mouse ~~~~~~~~~~~~ I once met, in this life Of poetry A Tiny Mouse Who was friendly and wonderful He was and still is My best friend I and that damned Tiny Mouse. Oh how much he loved To eat cheese Always my little Friend The Tiny Mouse I used to feed him chesse Always he would ask me What was that? Tiny Mouse, asked He was a genius In all types of games So he thought Never did he celebrate His loses. He loved winning Winning was everything To him Until the day He met and played With The Cat. The poor Tiny Mouse The only thing That was left of him Was his Tiny little tail Of my friend The poor Tiny Mouse. By: D'Artagnan William Bonilla 10/02/06 �

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on November 1, 2006

Oh ratz! :}

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 31, 2006

A most humorous tail.
Rusty

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

A wonderful spoof, of obviously a wonderful friend.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

awwww! <heheh>

Gina

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Magnifico! Very well done, William; bravo!~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

No, I don't know much Spanish. LOL

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Ohhhhh! Poor baby!
In the beginning I thought of Walt Disney. At the end I knew Mickey is living and will always be immortal as is your mouse friend today.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Good job, William. Poor little mouse! :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Great offering...most adorable you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

William this SINGS with color and joy...This was ADORABLE!!!! He he..

Love & Light,
Dove

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Lovely piece,william

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Adorable piece I like the two languages.......