She wanted me to shave her
I did
I washed, rinse, cleansed her
Of all loose cut hairs
She desired to be clean
I dabbed her dry
With a soft terry cloth
Upon her request
I powdered her with a tinge
Of baby talc
To make her smooth as silk
With a heavenly scent.
She laid still,
As I caressed her softly
Searshing for coarsed areas
Cuts and scratches
I felt her lips moist
I lower my head to inspect
When she smiled at me
I couldn't help myself
I placed a gentle, tender kiss
Upon the deliciousness
Of her pink lips
I lost my head
I couldn't stop
I rendered my soft tongue
She accepted it, without haste.
I felt hands
Pressing behind my head
Towards the moistness
Of her lips
The excitement caused my breath
To become laborious
At a point, she collapsed spent
The silence was a blessing
I gave her
A final gentle kiss
Laid my head
Next to her shaved tenderness
Drifting to sleep
With the scent, of baby talc
Upon my lips.
William...you never cease to amaze me. This is both lovely in theme and exceptional in the write. While I have seen you work in intimate verse before, this is in a class of its own.
WOW!! outstanding Better than my daytime show on TV call bold and The beautiful theirs More romance and suspense in this poem than
On the TV soups.
I can picture you shaving her wow a very sensual piece!!
Excellent imagery and a great collection of
chosen words Great rhythm and flow throughout
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
Was it a cut throat razor?
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
Must have been quite an experience....enjoyed it. Victor
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Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
HA!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
peace and love, Carole
On the TV soups.
I can picture you shaving her wow a very sensual piece!!
Excellent imagery and a great collection of
chosen words Great rhythm and flow throughout
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Susan
A bad thingy to do playing with razor sharp objects don't you think??
Now this is VERY romatic afterall!!
Love Tinka :)
Loved it.
Gods Speed
Michael