Your return pleases
My heart and soul
A thought
Of a flickering dim flame
Has rekindled to it's highest
It's brightest
Leaving a passionate
Burning feeling
Deep within this self
That awes at the mere sight
Of your loveliness.
~*~
Your smile though not a grin
Nor pronounced
Melts my soul within
It brightens dismal places
Where no one sees their faces
As they sit in shadowey corners.
~*~
The silkiness of your beautiful
Auburn hair
My fingers once
Passionately combed
As I used
To caress them through
When true love was there.
~*~
Your hair so beautiful
It crowns and adorns
The loveliness
That is you
The naturalness of your beauty
Make up free
Excites the little devil
Within me.
~*~
To embrace you
Is to kiss the divine softness
Of your tender lips
To whisper little naughty
Nothings, as I hold your
Voluptuousness
Within my grasp
Is what I truly live for.
~*~
As we drift into
Sereneness
I stare into you
Heavenly mysterious
Green eyes
Still embrace and spent.
By: "D'Artagnan"
William Bonilla
01/03/07
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Reviews of "A Flame Rekindled"
Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2007
"It brightens dismal places / Where no one sees their faces".....love that. This is so beautiful and passionate. Even the printed shape of the poem is sensual, whether intended or not. Excellent. JM
Beautiful write my friend...one that is full of sensual emotions expressing that true love can be rekindled, if only in our dreams....
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The forever love, though gone in body ,returns in our dreams and supports what was ours and will always be ours. This is a dreamy
slice of heavem written from the heart.
Love,
Susan
You have the heart of a true romantic, William. This poem is so softly captivating and speaks to the reader in gentle tones of love. Very well done, my friend.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
William your words are passionate and beautiful in this poem........
Emotions flow so beautiful.
Bless you,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Lovely poem, a return of a loved one and all is back as it was. Love triumphs. Victor
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Oh my ,....How Beautiful this is...Hugsssssssssssssssssssss
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Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
slice of heavem written from the heart.
Love,
Susan
peace and love, Carole
Love Tinka
Wow! this was so, so romantic~ William
Lucky her!
:)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Loved it,
Michael
Love,
CJ
Emotions flow so beautiful.
Bless you,
Joselyn