The Mask (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

There is enchantment in every one of these poems, William. Through the eyes of a child is the best way to view life. Enjoyed them all...and don't forget to tell Gabrielle and Brianna!!

Micke

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

it's a family affair William, refreshing and very interesting poetry

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Introspective and unique writing William, you are branching out
Love the offerings of your grandchildren, their take on life is amazing
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Enjoyed very much...Hugsssssss

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

There's wonderful truth when children get creative. It's a pleasure to read the way children see our world.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Enjoyed all of them...thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Your first poem was quite a riddle. The others heart warmers. All written in good style. Victor

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

What stirring past memories you evoke here William,...through the eyes of a child as I once said, nothing is more beautiful. Well done. Panda:)

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Very touching! Brings you right into the room. Makes me think back to when my granmother was very ill and presumably died of heart failure.I can still see her laying there.Thanks for sharing this loving yet sad poem.
God Bless,
Michael

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Your poem was most intriguing, William - and your grandchildren's poems were delightful. Grandparents are Cool!

Reviewed by Bella Christopher (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Very interesting! I like the imagination here, or was it really a dream you had? It also touched me as my grandpa was very sick and ultimately died of cancer when I was 7. I used to sit beside him and this brings back images of that for me.
Nice one!
Penny

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

The mask is a bit eerie, enjoyed though...very well written, you've penned it so that you take the reader with you into the room with the elderly man. Would like to know who the little boy was that you saw in the dream. Loved car wash, I too had much fun with my maternal grandparents...just like a second set of parents, only one's whom you could get away with a bit more mischief! Great writes, both!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling