I let her touch it
Last night
So she can feel it's hardness
It was rock hard
It was all I could do
It just felt so good
'Twas just before dawn
Through parted blinds
Shone the silvery beams
From
A beautiful bright full moon.
Bearing the forces
Of the discovered hardness
Which woke me up
Had to grab a handle on it
Trying my best to control it
As she slept
I almost pressed it, against her,
I did not wish
To awaken her, abruptly
So I gently placed her hand
On it
It's hardness amazed her
She grasp it
Maneuvering it every wich way
But loose
Left to right, up and down
Without hurting me or it
She did it with a smile.
I seemed to have awaken
A sleeping dragon
She was infatuated, as she held it
I asked her isn't it hard?
She smiled, does it hurt
She asked?
I replied no
I explained, The doctor
Said I have To keep my foot
In the "cast"
For several months.
First three lines, I thought: what is William...why is William...sputter! But did I stop? No..I mean, inquisitive minds must know! You rascal you...all the while forming this GOTCHA! And you certainly did with this tantilizing poem!
Micke
(still laughing...)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
My girl asked me for a foot and make her bleed..So I gave her a 12" rule and punched her in the nose..lol
Hahahahahah...Oh just thought.......never mind..that "cast thingy" casted some naughty thoughts in my silly mind THATS FOR SURE...shame on you William!!!!!
Oh you stinker you! Had us all going for a minute...here I sat at lunch in my classroom where our Internet activity is tracked..thinking OH MY GOSH! But dedicated me...and curious me read on...you've penned a captivating story my friend, and given me a smile for the day, nothing wrong with smiling...Only if I am still smiling I can't explain it to six year olds when they return from lunch...loved it!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Blessings,
You had my attention from the title, you rascal...then I just about sprayed my coffee across my screen when I read the finish, I was laughing so hard...just what I needed on this gloomy winter day William
love and peace, Carole
... you had me going there for awhile, you ornery scamp! A cleverly written tale that surely drew this reader in from the first line to the hysterical twist at the end!
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
Crafted witty on this I almost had to cover my eyes WILLIAM!
CAST ARE NOT FUN.
PEACE,
Joselyn
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good one(hahaha)
love,
susan
Micke
(still laughing...)
Love Tinka :) (I am in stitches laughing)
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Blessings,
love and peace, Carole
Love,
CJ
CAST ARE NOT FUN.
PEACE,
Joselyn
You had me going big time.I was all wrapped up in it.
Anyway,thanks for sharing this cute poem
God Bless,
Michael