This is far too sweet of a moment to be a dream, but also, far too sweet of a moment to be anything else. I love the sensuality of this poem along with the great rhythm and flow. You dragged me in and kept me captivated within your verse.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
I'd get booted for that.
She ain't in no glass or bottle, unless her name is Genie..
A very talented write William.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Good thing you were only dreaming :) She would have mesmerised anyone. Victor
Aww! You've penned this one so well my friend, I was right there with you down to the last line, I just knew you had met the love of your life! Great write with an almost sad surpize ending! Masterfully written!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
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Perfect capture, William...
love and peace, Carole
this one would be it.
Dream on William...
Love,
Susan
I just wondered ...did she step on your sore foot???
Smiling...just kidding!!
What a lovely dream huh?
Love tinka
You just had to remind me of far too many of those kind of nights, D'Artagnan, but you did it very well!
Very creative,loved this William,
God Bless,
Michael
"She Was Persuasive" is a glowing composition to
enrich the pages of the history of Poetry.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love,
CJ
Take care,
Sherry
She ain't in no glass or bottle, unless her name is Genie..
A very talented write William.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Light & peace,
Joselyn